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Noob:

--- Quote from: shredc0re on June 04, 2012, 12:19:15 AM ---Roses are red, fuck this, just suck my dick.

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XDDDDD

shredc0re:

--- Quote from: Hi on June 04, 2012, 01:38:57 AM ---
--- Quote from: shredc0re on June 04, 2012, 12:19:15 AM ---Roses are red, fuck this, just suck my dick.

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XDDDDD


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It worked on my girlfriend.

NekoJonez:
Being creative


--- Quote ---The life of a creator is though you know...
It's not easy to let people really say wow.
Sometimes it can be a blow,
when somebody made a bad remark in those comments down below.

It's diffuclt to understand...
But the readers sometimes don't apprehend.
Making a new creation for your gallery,
even if it's just a simple melody.

From artists till writers we are all the same,
we sometimes give our viewers the blame,
for pretending
or for the wrong understanding.

Some comments are just a lie,
like humans who can fly.
Being creative is one thing...
But you have to do it when a certain... swing

Creating at free will,
it's only good when your readers take it as a pill.
That sounds weird and stupid... but still.
It's what keeps running a creator his or her creative mill.

Writing isn't about looking for fame,
Although many of us get that blame.
Creating is to about the numbers...
Who drop down by all those blunders.

~ NekoJonez
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NekoJonez:
Backstory of this poem:

(click to show/hide)This was inspired by a recent event. I was talking to a good friend of mine on MSN and suddenly he disappeared. He lives in the USA and lately we are ripped apart by shitty events. In my head, I started making the situation worse then it actually is. That's the inspiration of this poem.

--- Quote from: I was just left alone ---I was just left alone.
The WiFi didn’t want to work on my phone,
I was just left alone.

I was waiting for two hours,
sometimes  looked to my flowers.
Why do live at the other side of the ocean,
we  should put that meeting plan in motion.

I was just left alone.
Waiting at home,
I was just left alone.

When you suddenly left, I felt totally broken.
Confused, was I maybe outspoken?
Friendship is what bounds us, that’s how are chats went
after all those countless hours we spent.

I was just left alone.
I should have known,
I was left alone.

Unprepared and worried, I couldn’t fall asleep.
Not even with counting sheep.
You live in that other timezone,
it gives me a chill to a bone.

I was just left alone.
My happy mood was blown.
I was just left alone.

Maybe you didn’t foresee this as well,
then may the cause die in hell.
I realize that something might have interrupted you,
but I didn’t had a clue.

I was just left alone.
The worries have only grown.
I was just left alone.

Maybe they took your voice,
or you didn’t had any choice.
I just want to talk to you,
but somehow I think you have that wish too.

I was just left alone.
Sitting here on my own.
I was left all alone.
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dark 5FVD:
The time passes as i try to find some entertainement ore for a friend to meet.
ONE HOUR , two hours, three hours, four hours go buy a day, A week, a month, a year. nothing.
My friends get lost at school everybody forgets me and just drops me.
what is the point of life then if you have nobody to talk to.
Nothing...
and then a new year begins with the same problems different people.

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